Here is the link to a story I wrote a while back.... I am looking for some feed back there are 12 chapters. I want feed back on my writing style and rather or not my story can hold one's attention. I am in the process of writing my own book but I want to make sure that I am not wasting my time and I can hold my audiences attention long enough to finish reading my book...

Thanks in Advance!

Social Butterflyy

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